– What are the effects of spirituality in business? What impact does spirituality have in the workplace?
– You should use the EFQM excellence model and write more about it as a sound framework to build upon i.e. enablers into results
– Need a definition of religion but has to be concise and clear as this is not the primary focus of your research
– I think you should mention of ‘trust’ as a key driver in your review of the literature
– If you could include some case studies it would add some value/credibility to your work e.g codes of conduct/ethics, ENRON, BARCLAYS BANK, Etc.
– Why did you chose Sikkhism, Hinduism and Christianity from the many religions of the world please mention more religions? Add more Religions even a paragraph of each
– Your literature review needs configuring e.g. section 1, 1.1, 1.1.1, etc.
– Keep a record of word count 9000
– The ‘bibliography’ section should read ‘references’ – a bibliography is a list of reading material you have studied but not referenced in the text
– Where will data/information come from? Case studiy, interview, etc?
– You will then need to think about how you will present and discuss your findings and link them back to your literature review.